读后续写范文20篇点评

读后续写练习（一）

A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining heavily that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.

and was going to help the person to stand up. At that time, he found it was a dead man and there

baskets with him.

officer asked, “Are these yours?”

“Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地).

“No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry.

“When did you see the dead man?”

“At about seven last night.”

“Did you see who killed the man?”

“No, sir.”

The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet?”

“No, sir.”

prison. the officer wanted to trap(设陷阱) the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer(谋杀犯).

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.

The farmer was lucky .A few days later,

Possible answer:

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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. He hoped that someone could come and save him.

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The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. He was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.

简评：

1.The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people.这一句可以改为形容词作状语的悬垂结构：Afraid / Frightened, the farmer thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people.

2.He hoped that someone could come and save him.可改成感叹句，语气更加强烈：How he hoped that someone could come and save him!

3....a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. 后半部分词作状语，构成悬垂结构。saying可以换成declaring 宣布; saw可换成witnessed,目击。

4.It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! 强调句，高级。强调部分还可以加上否定内容使语意更加完整。此处可以用到It was not... but... that ...或者It was ... rather than...that ...即：It was not the farmer but the police officer that killed the man on the snow! 或者It was the police officer rather than the farmer that killed the man on the snow!

5.So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. 中took the great courage to 鼓起极大勇气做某事。

6.After the investigation, the young man was right. 建议改为：After investigation,the police found what the young man had said was the truth.

7.The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.最后一句可以适当加上副词。Immediately, the police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired. Eventually,the poor farmer was released and the brave young man was regarded as the hero

by the villagers.

读后续写练习（二）

I was responding to a call from a small brick flat(用砖做的公寓) in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was being sent to pick up some party-goers，or someone who had just had a fight with a lover，or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial part of town.

When I arrived at 2：30 a.m.，the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances，many drivers just honk（按喇叭）once or twice，wait a minute，then drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only means of transportation.

Unless a situation smelled of danger，I always went to the door.

This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance，I reasoned to myself. So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute，” answered a frail，elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a long pause，the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat ，like somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon suitcase.

The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the walls，no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.

“Would you carry my bag out to the car？” she said. I took the suitcase to the cab，then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm，and we walked slowly toward the cab.

She kept thanking me for my kindness. “It's nothing,” I told her. “I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated.”

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown?” Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it…

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Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown?” Asked why we didn’t take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. Besides, she asked me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At last, she said she was tired and wanted to go to the hospice. Paragraph 2:

we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it was a low building,

where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up. I opened the trunk and took the suitcase to the door and the woman was already seated in a wheelchair. When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her a bug . It was my assistance that helped one

of weak people realize her wish.

简评：

1.Asked w hy we didn’t take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city. 这一句句式灵活，asked分词作状语,why引导一个宾语从句，后面主语部分也有一个宾语从句。

2.We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. 定语从句，由where引导。

3.and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. 现在分词作状语。

4. a low building,where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up.两个定语从句。

5.When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her

a bug .时间状语从句。

6.It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.强调句。

读后续写练习（三）

A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office, a street urchin(顽童), called Tom, was walking around the shining car.

“Is this your car, sir?” Tom asked.

“Yes, my brother gave it to me for Christmas.” Jack answered.

Tom was surprised. “You mean your brother gave it to you and it cost you nothing? Sir, I

wish……” He hesitated(犹豫).

Jack thought of course(路线), he knew what Tom wanted, but what Tom said surprised him greatly.

“I wish,” Tom went on, “that I could be a brother like that.”

Jack lo oked at Tom in surprise, and then he said again, “Would you like to take a ride(搭车) in my car?”

“Oh yes, I’d love to,” Tom answered.

After a short ride, Tom turned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my house?”

Jack smiled a little. He thought he knew what Tom wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong again.

“Will you stop where those two steps(台阶) are?” Tom asked.

注意：

1．所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3．续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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He got out and ran up to the steps.

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Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car.

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He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard Tom coming back, but he was not coming fast. Tom was carrying his little crippled(残疾的) brother. He sat down on the step and pointed to the car.

“There he is, Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn’t cost him a cent. And some day I’m going to give you one just like it…then you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas windows that I’ve been trying to tell you about”Paragraph 2

Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car.The shining-eyed elder brother climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday ride., looking at all those

beautiful things. That Christmas Eve, Jack learned the real meaning of the words: “It’s more b lessed to give than to receive.” He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like that.”

读后续写练习（四）

Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living. One night I went to pick up a passenger at 2:30 a. m. When I arrived to collect, I found the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window.

I walked to the door and knocked, "Just a minute," answered a weak, elderly voice.

After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her eighties stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase.

I took the suitcase to the car, and then returned to help the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly towards the car.

She kept thanking me for my kindness. "It's nothing," I told her. "I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated."

"Oh, you're such a good man." She said. When we got into the taxi, she gave me an address, and then asked, "Could you drive through downtown?"

"It's not the shortest way," I answered quickly.

"Oh, I'm in no hurry," she said. "I'm on my way to a hospice (临终医院). I don't have any family left. The doctor says I don't have very long. "

I quietly reached over and shut off the meter (计价器). For the next two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked, the neighborhood where she had lived, and the furniture shop that had once been a ballroom where she had gone dancing as a girl.

Sometimes she'd ask me to slow down in front of a particular building and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing.

At dawn, she suddenly said, "I'm tired. Let's go now." We drove in silence Lo the address she had given me.

"How much do I owe you?" she asked.

"Nothing." I said.

"You have to make a living," she answered. "Oh, there are other passengers," I answered. She said thanks to me, but she looked so sad.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug.

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I was on my way to visit her.

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Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly. Before the woman left , I said to her, “My mother treated everyone kindly, she is a great person, but she passed away years ago. you are like my mother,” the woman said, “ thank you. If you want to visit me,I’ll tell you my story.” Then the woman left. After a long pause, I drove the taxi to go home. Paragraph 2

The next day, I was on my way to visit her. The old woman told me that she used to be a millionaire. She became immersed in making money. She was the owner of a particular building we saw last night. But she neglected her family. her only son died one year ago because of cancer. She sold everything to save him, but failed. How sad！At last, the old woman said to me, “Life is short, but please be in no hurry. Though everyone has to earn money to make a living, always remember that family is the most important thing to you,” I said nothing but nodded hard.

读后续写练习（六）

Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station(加油站)about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas.

I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friend's .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card.

I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful.

Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning. In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me.

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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.

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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. I recognized him at once. the two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership. “ Hey, it’s you! you ever helped me, remember?” I said to them excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people. you know, it makes our life so meaningful!”Paragraph 2

After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.they solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. they told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy

about.

读后续写练习（七）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Jack, a clerk at the local bank, was wandering alone on the street. It was a cold, silent winter

real world is cruel. A large amount of money was still needed. To Jack, it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help. “I have only one option left,” Jack said to himself. Then he went the bank, his workplace, again. For several days, he observed the bank and planned

The next day, he went to work as usual. Everything seemed normal: he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did. But no one noticed that he had brought a

bathroom, He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase. He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days. Using a special key and some other tools, he

allowed Jack to take a lot of money. Several minutes later, Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已成为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while, the alarms began to ring. Paragraph 2:

But the most unlucky man was the manger of the bank, an old man.

【解析】

【题干分析】

本文是一篇记叙文。主要叙述了Jack作为银行工作人员，利用职务之便，为了筹钱给妻子动手术，成功地偷走了银行的钱。

根据第一段提示，此段应描写银行和社会对此事的反应；

根据第二段首句提示，银行经理成为了最不幸的人。尽管Jack为妻子治好了病，但心理上也发生了很大的变化。

【相关语法点提示】

promise to do sth. 承诺做某事；

be busy doing sth. 忙于做某事；

as soon as possible 越快越好；

as time went by 随着时间的流逝。

【解答】

范文:

After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while, the alarms began to ring. The police arrived at the bank very quickly, only to find no one there. The next day was a really special day for the town, which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft. The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case, of course, including Jack. The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible, even though no clues had been found yet.

But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank, an old man. He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position. At last, with enough money for her operation, Jack's wife was saved. However, Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank. He could not forget what he had done to the old man. His guilt deepened as time went by. Finally, he turned himself in to the police and accepted his punishment.

读后续写练习（八）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was one o’clock in the morning. In the Rivesville town art gallery, a window opened

“There it is!” he said.

Harry moved quickly across the room. He stood and looked at the painting.

“A million dollars for this?” he thought. “I don’t understand it.”

But he took a knife from his coat. Then he took the painting very, very slowly from its frame. Harry went back across the room to the window, but he walked into a table. There was a beautiful blue glass vase on the table. It fell on the floor and broke into pieces. He ran across

Harry rented a room in Mrs. Allen’s house. He went quietly up to his room and closed the

put the newspaper under his bed.

at the Rivesville art gallery. He was talking about the lost painting and the broken glass vase.

looking for old newspapers. Every Friday morning, she took them from every room in the house. Then later, the newspaper recycling truck arrived.

Janey opened Harry’s door and looked into his room. She always took his old newspapers or bottles for recycling. She found a newspaper under Harry’s bed. She put the old newspapers

And she quickly gave the box to one of the men.

Harry came back to the house. He saw the recycling truck, and he was Janey.

“The newspaper——！Oh, no!” Harry said.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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He chased after the truck.

________________________________________________________________________ _________

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Then Janey called the police on the telephone.

________________________________________________________________________ _________

One possible versions:

He chased after the truck.By coincidence, the traffic light in the nearest crossing

Harry managed to get close to it and reached the black recycling box. Having held the

noticing a thin piece of glass drop. However, Jenny witnessed what had happened. Driven

Then Janey called the police on the phone. She informed the police of where the taxi was heading and the doubtful piece of glass she had just found. “It’s exactly from the

hut. Eventually, the painting was returned to the art gallery and Harry was punished for his greed. （74）

读后续写练习（九）

when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the mot

was different.

Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat t

nd people were running and crying.

They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea what she was doing, but he followed her.

Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who the

wer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighbors—some

mind.

“She might have run for safety like everyone else!” Tom cried. However, Jane refused to give up. “I know Makcik’s still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik’s daily r

Go now! Go!”

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. ___________________________________ Paragraph 2:

Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.

Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot.

of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though

Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength imm

k must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough,

e hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom’s joy was immense.【解析】汤姆家楼下的汽车店发生了火灾,汤姆和姐姐J ane赶紧从家里从出来逃生。快到走廊尽头的时候,Jane突然停了下来,往回跑去。原来,她是要去救同住一楼的70多岁的Makcik。所给短文写到ane坚持不懈的敲Makcik的门。要求学生续写这个故事。所给故事比较好理解,主要考查学生的基本理解能力和表达能力。所给范文符合故事的情节发展,突出了“正能量。范文中,不仅描述了人物的具体行动,还描述了人物的内心感受内容充实,符合实际。

读后续写练习（十）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．

It was Christmas Day．Pappy was working alone fixing an old lantern in the backroom when he heard the ringing of his bell on the shop door．The bell，which produced a u niquely pleasant sound，had been in Pappy's family for over a hundred years．He value d it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop．Although the b ell hung on the inside of the main door，Pappy had tied a wire to the screen door so t hat it would ring whether the inner door was open or not．Hearing the bell，he left the backroom to greet his customer．

"And how can I help you，little lady？" Pappy's voice was joyful．

"Hello，sir．" The little girl spoke almost in a whisper．She looked at Pappy with her big brown eyes，and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special．Shy ly she told him，"I'd like to buy a present，sir．"

"Well，let's see，" Pappy said，"who is this present for？"

"My grandpa．It's for my grandpa．But I don't know what to get．"

Pappy began to make suggestions．"How about a pocket watch？It's in good condition．" The little girl didn't answer．She had walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door．She shook the door gently to ring the bell．Pappy's face seemed to glow as he saw her smiling with excitement．

浙江英语高考读后续写

高考读后续写训练1. Name________________ It had been some time since Jack had seen the old man. College, career, and life itself got in the way. In fact, Jack moved clear across the country in pursuit (追寻) of the dreams. There, in the rush of his busy life, Jack had little time to think about the past and often no time to spend with his wife and son. He was working on his future, and nothing could stop him. Over the phone, his mother told him, “Mr. Belser died last night. The funeral（葬礼）is Wednesday.” Memories flashed（闪现）through his mind like an old newsreel (新闻短片) as he sat quietly remembering his childhood days. “Jack, did you hear me?” “Oh, sorry, Mom. Yes, I heard you. It’s been so long since I thought of him. I’m sorry, but I honestly thought he died years ago,” Jack said. “Well, he didn’t forget you. Every time I saw him he’d ask how you were doing. He’d reminisce (回忆) about the many days you spent over ‘his side of the fence’ as he put it, ” Mom told him. “I loved that old house he lived in,” Jack said. “You know, Jack, after your father died, Mr. Belser stepped in to make sure you had a man’s influence (影响) in your life,” she said. “He’s the one who taught me carpentry. I wouldn’t be in this business if it weren’t for him. He spent a lot of time teaching me things that he thought were important. Mom, I’ll be there for the funeral.” Jack said. Busy as he was, he kept his word. Jack caught the next flight to his hometown. Mr. Belser’s funeral was small and uneventful. He had no children of his own, and most of his relatives had passed away. The night before he had to return home, Jack and his Mom stopped by to see the old house next door one more time, which was exactly as he remembered. Every step held memories. Every picture, every piece of furniture … Jack stopped suddenly. “What’s wrong, Jack?” his Mom asked. “The box is gone,” he said. “What box?” Mom ask ed. “There was a small gold box that he kept locked on top of his desk. I must have asked him a thousand times what was inside. All he’d ever tell me was ‘the thing I value most’,” Jack said. It was gone. Everything about the house was exactly how Jack remembered it, except for the box. He figured someone from the Belser family had taken it. “Now I’ll never know what was so valuable to him,” Jack said sadly. 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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