读后续写范例 (四篇)

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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

（一）

The other day I was travelling to San Antonio by train to visit my sister. The train was a little crowded and there was a young man sitting next to the window. Since it was a hot day, I wanted that window seat more than anything else at that time As a young lady, I thought the young man would give me the seat if I asked him. So I smiled at him and asked whether he could give up his seat and take another one. To my surprise, he said that he needed that seat and refused my request. I had no choice but to take the seat next to him.

The train was crossing station after station .The weather was so hot that the scenery(风景) outside the window could not attract my interest I had nothing to do, so I started to focus my attention on the young man and stare at him up and down. He wore a blue shirt and there was a shawl(披巾) on his legs. He did not even rise from his seat once, which made me feel a little bit strange. Moreover, only a madman would use a shawl in such hot weather, I thought.

After the five-hour long journey, the train arrived at the final stop. I picked up my bag and stood up, waiting for the door to open. I gave a

neglectful (不经意的) look at the young man and asked, “The train has arrived at the final station. Are you not getting off?" Hearing my words, he began to smile at me and said in a calm voice, "Someone has to come for me and take me off the train because I can’t do it by myself. "I gave my full attention to his legs, only to find there was nothing under that shawl!

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The man was a disabled person.______________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ paragraph 2

After hearing his story, I could not meet his eyes any more.______________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________参考答案：

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The man was a disabled person. Both of his legs were gone. I couldn't believe what I saw and didn't know how to ease my embarrassment. Seeing the surprised expression on my face, the young man explained, “I lost both of my legs in a car accident three years ago. I' m a medical student and went to pay a visit to my parents and now I am returning to school. One of my classmates will come to pick me up.

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After hearing his story, I could not meet his eyes anymore! I wished I could disappear in front of him at that moment. I didn't get off the train until his classmate walked to his seat and picked him up. How could I have such a strange idea about a person without knowing him? I realized it's always necessary to understand the truth behind someone’s words or actions. I have given up my wrong opinions about others without thinking since then.

（二）

Rain is pouring down today, which brings back sweet memories of our dog, Bambi. She joined our family at the age of four months. Like all puppies, she was full of energy and wonder. Our boys described excitedly that she looked just like the young deer, Bambi, in the movie they had watched recently. The name fitted her personality perfectly.

Bambi also had all the fine physical characteristics of the German Shepherd. She was strong, yet gentle and shy. We were a young family with two growing, energetic boys, so she fitted right in with our lifestyle. Bambi loved the boys. She would play with them until they were completely tired .

When Bambi was almost two years old, a full-grown dog, she became quite protective of us. She never failed to watch the boys. If any stranger entered our yard, she d watch him or her with sharp eyes and let out a low

bark. Even though Bambi had this protective instinct(本能), she never hurt anyone. Nevertheless, she did manage to frighten(惊吓) away many welcome and unwelcome guests.

On one occasion, I had called a repairman to come to our home to fix the refrigerator. I was at work, and the boys were home with the babysitter I told the repairman by phone that we had a dog, but it would be safe to enter the house because the babysitter would be there to meet him. However when the repairman arrived, the babysitter and boys went outside. As he went close to our front door, Bambi was outside and she barked at him while she guarded the door. As long as the man attempted to move, Bambi would jump up and bark more fiercely(凶猛地)。This man had never seen such a fierce dog before and was frightened too much. He had no idea whether to go away or scream for help.

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Luckily, the babysitter and boys returned from their walk at that time._______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________. Paragraph 2:

Though Bambi was so brae, there was a side to her personality that didn’t match her._____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________.参考答案:

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Luckily, the babysitter and boys returned from their walk at that time. They rescued the poor frightened repairman from our guard dog. They told Bambi that it was okay to allow the man to enter our home. But Bambi seemed still couldn't trust this stranger. While the repairman was busy in the kitchen, she kept a watchful eye on him, which made the man very nervous. When he finished his work, he was very glad to go back. This story is always mentioned whenever we talk about Bambi. Paragraph 2:

Though Bambi was so brave, there was a side to her personality that didn't match her. She was terrified of thunder and lightning. On any summer day when the sun disappeared behind the clouds, Bambi would race to the door and demand to stay inside. She seemed to have the ability to feel the coming rain. Usually, she was correct because rain, thunder and lightning would soon follow. Though Bambi was no longer with us, our wonderful memories of her remain to brighten rainy days

(三)

Jenny and Lisa are close friends. They’re studying in high school now One day about half a year ago, Jenny went to Lisa's house after she finished her homework.

After entering Lisa’s home, Jenny found that Lisa was chatting on her cellphone. Jenny was surprised as she didn’t know Lisa had gone

downtown to buy a cellphone.

After Lisa finished talking over the cellphone Jenny asked her, "When did you get your cellphone?

"I bought it yesterday. Look! How lovely it looks! " said Lisa Jenny looked at the cellphone. It was pink and looked really lovely. Jenny wished she also could have such a cellphone That day, after Jenny came back home. she saw her father sitting on the sofa reading a newspaper Jenny approached him and said, "Dad, could I have a cellphone? Many of my classmates have their own cellphones now. “Of course, you can have one,” said Jenny's father.

Hearing that, Jenny became very happy “ Thank you,Dad,” Jenny said happily. Then she asked, When shall we go downtown to buy one? The father looked up. Then he said, Oh, no, dear! I'm not going to buy you a cellphone. If you really want one, you should make money to buy one yourself. Jenny immediately became upset. But she knew her father was serious. She walked away and went to her own room The following day, Jenny went to school as usual. When Lisa saw her at school. she looked a bit upset. Lisa came to her and asked why she was wearing a long face that day. Jenny said,"I asked my dad to buy a cellphone for me, but he said I should work for one myself.

But Lisa didn’t seem to be surprised at all, and she said,"Don't get surprised, because that’s how I bought my own cellphone Hearing that,

Jenny remembered Lisa once told her she was helping to look after the Smiths’ one-year-old son in the past summer. Now she knew why she worked part-time that summer. Lisa wanted a new cellphone and she worked to make money for it

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That day after Jenny came back home from school, she went to her father.______________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ _____________________________________

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Jenny started to work part-time._______________________________——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————。

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That day after Jenny came back home from school, she went to her father. She was no longer upset. She told her father that she had decided to find a job to make money.“Good”said her father. Jenny started to look for part-time work on the Internet. Lucky for her, some families in the neighborhood were looking for part-time workers. One old couple needed

someone to cut the grass. A young couple needed someone to look after their baby. Jenny called the families and she was offered the jobs Paragraph 2

Jenny started to work part-time. First she cut the grass for the old couple. And then she looked after the baby for the young couple .She kept doing other part-time jobs. Three months later, Jenny had enough money for a cellphone. She went downtown. But she didn't buy a cellphone. Instead, she bought a birthday gift for her father because it was her father's birthday the following day. She thought the gift was very meaningful and her father might be happy because she bought it with her own money.

（四）

Alexis and Zoe were sitting at the kitchen table doing their homework. They had a hard time focusing on their homework because the radio station was playing music from their favourite band, the Shape Shifters .“I can’t believe the Shifters are going to be playing here and we cant go! "Alexis said .

“I know,”Zoe replied. "Tickets are sold out in five minutes and even if we can get some, they are so expensive!”

“It’s totally unfair,” said Alexis.

“ They should give the tickets to their biggest fans first! “ You mean us, right?” Zoe said . "Obviously, " said Alexis. “Everyone knows we’ re

their number one fans .”

Zoe turned the radio up a bit louder. Their favourite song was on, and the girls had an impromptu(即兴的) dance party right there in the kitchen. As it ended, they sat on their chairs again. The radio host started talking about the concert .

“I have exciting news to share with all of you. We will give away two tickets to Saturday's sold-out show and will look for the third caller who can correctly answer this question: who is the oldest member of the Shape Shifters?” the host said. Alexis and Zoe looked at each other. They couldn’t believe how easy the question was. "It's Georgie! "said Alexis "No, it's Natasha, "answered Zoe “ Everyone knows Georgie is 29. He’ s much older than the rest of the band.”said Alexis .

"I know he's the oldest person, but the question is who's the oldest member of the band. Natasha started the band when she was just 15. The others joined the group after her."Zoe explained.

Alexis thought for a while and later agreed with Zoe. And they decided to call the radio station to answer that question. They stood together and held their breath “ Hello, girls, you are lucky caller Number 3.”The girls screamed excitedly. "Nobody seems to know the answer to our question. Do you? " the host continued.

Zoe said,“ We know the answer!”“I hope so. If you get it right, you'll have a chance to Saturdays sold-out show! "

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“Okay, I am ready to answer that question,” Zoe said breathlessly .

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Paragraph 2 “Congratulations, girls! You've won two tickets to this concert!" the host shouted.

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“Okay. I am ready to answer that question, ”Toe said breathlessly. “We think people don't understand the question. Georgie is the oldest person in the band, but your question Is which member is the oldest and that means who has been in the band the longest. So we think the answer is Natasha! " The girls waited and the kitchen clock ticked on, making each second slower. Were they wrong? Were they going to miss out on their only chance to see their favorite band?

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“Congratulations, girls! You’ve won two tickets to this concert! "the host shouted. The girls screamed, dropping the telephone in their

excitement. They picked it up quickly and could hear the host laughing on the other end.“ You must be big fans of the band.”“The biggest!"answered the girls, hugging each other happily. They thanked the radio station for providing them with these two tickets And the host said that they deserved them because they grasped the chance to pursue what they really cared for at the right time.

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