雅思写作经验分享~~从6分到7.5分的漫漫长路

写作分享篇

17个不能回避的雅思写作问题

1.考官是怎么改卷子的？标准是怎样的？

2.雅思写作7分是什么样的概念？

3.雅思写作6分与7分或者6.5分与7分的距离有多远？

4.怎么制定雅思写作复习计划？

5.考试前需要写多少篇的大作文和小作文？

6.写作模版管用吗？

7.雅思写作需要背多少个词汇？

8.雅思写作需要什么样的句型？

9.雅思写作需要多复杂的从句和语法？

10.我们对雅思写作的误区

11.鸭友们通常会犯哪些语法错误，能有效避免吗？什么样的语法错误是致命的？

12.雅思写作能速成吗？平时需要多看英文报纸吗？

13.小作文重要吗？容易写吗？应该怎么复习

14.怎么安排大作文和小作文的写作顺序和时间

15.要买参考书吗？什么样的参考书？

16.参加培训班管用吗？

17.网络上面所谓的―名师‖雅思写作预测有用吗？

TASK 1 小作文

曾经一直忽视小作文，甚至认为雅思写作约等于是写一篇250字的大作文。轻视它的原因可以归结为，字数少(只要150字)，不需要个人观点(纯粹描述客观figures)，有固定的单词和句型，分数只占总分的1/3···直到后来与考官见面的时候，我才意识到小作文的杀伤力。This is especially true when it comes to those who only got band 6.5 but indeed demand band 7.0。有时候，6.5分到7分的距离，小作文起了决定性的作用。

按照剑桥雅思的分类，小作文可为：柱状图(bar chart)，饼图(pie chart)，曲线图(line graph)，表格(table)，地图(map)和流程图(processing chart)。当然，这只是按照这些图表的属性和特征来归类。为什么我要费那么多笔墨在这个人所共知的问题上面呢？经过我1个月的练习和研究，我发现，如果按照这样的归类，我们得总结出6套相对应的模版(句型和词汇)。其实这样是吃力不讨好，事倍功半的，因为这样的归类方法严重地影响了我们的复习方案和练习计划，而且并没有很好地反应出task 1的本质要求。

我的个人认为，应该把柱状图，饼图，曲线图和表格看作一个总体，然后区分出是纵向比较还是横向比较（下面会继续解释它们的区别和应对方案）；然后地图题是一类，流程图是另外一类。也就是说按照本人的经验，task1 小作文按照图表的本质应该分为：横向比较，纵向比较，地图题和流程图。

Part 1 纵向比较和横向比较

由于雅思写作task 1中，柱状图，饼图，曲线图和表格占了绝大多数，所以这个板块应该作为复习的重点。每当我们拿到题目的时候，我们第一件事应该做什么？对，看图表（果然是一句废话）！！其实我的意思是，我们得首先观察它们究竟是：不同物体在同一时间点的比较（即横向比较），还是单一物体在不同时间点的比较（即纵向比较）。这一点非常非常非常非常非常重要！！！因为不同的比较，有着不同的内在比较关系。详细分析如下

横向比较：由于没有时间的变动，因此不存在物体或数据的波动，也就是说，那些描述变化趋势、描述变化特征的词汇和句型完全不适用。此时此刻，我们要focus的是

?首先我们要找出极值（最大值和最小值）

?然后客观地、略有筛选地描述剩余数据（若数据太多，则有所侧重；若数据不多，则全部描述）

?接着就是高潮了--找出不同数据之间的共同特征和大小比较（比如说，谁和谁一样大/小，谁是谁的几分之几，谁是谁的多少倍）

?高潮过后，就需要有一个意犹未尽但有心无力的总结

纵向比较：顾名思义，就是由于时间的推移，不同物体和数据之间发生了量的变化，也就是说，这时候关于描述变化趋势和变化特征的词汇和句型就用得上了。此时此刻，我们要c oncentrate的是

?首先客观描述变化的大体趋势（是升高了还是降低了，是多了还是少了）

?然后描述变化的具体特征（是怎样增加的，是怎样减少的，幅度如何，速率如何）

?接着找出变化趋势相似的不同物体，然后客观描述一下，以减少单词和词汇的重复使用，避免啰嗦

?同样，这里也需要一个纵横全局的归纳和总结

说了那么多，估计你们也看烦看腻了。毕竟很多人都想着一蹴而就，想着尽可能多背单词多抄句型。好吧，闲话不多说，上货！请大家验明正身！！

程度副词

多于：More than, just over, over

少于：Less than, just under

几乎：Approximately, almost, nearly

完全：Exactly, precisely

表示列举data/information句型

1. Overall, A has the largest number of名词(NO1) and B the smallest (NO

2). C and D both have NO3; E has NO4.

Overall, Sweden has the largest number of enrolled students (17) and Syria the smallest (5). France and Spain both have 12 students; Germany has 11. It is notic eable that France and Germany have similar profiles.

2. A has the most+名词+doing (NO1); B is next with NO2, while C has N O

3. D and E have (相同) NO4 each

Sweden has the most students studying CAD (9); Spain is next with7, while France has 6. Germany and Syria have 4 CAD students each.

3. According to the pie chart, A, which is %, is the most···among the tot al···, then next is B with %, followed by C, making up %; and finally co me E, F and G at %, %, % respectively.

According to the pie chart, chicken, which is 40%, is the most popular among the t otal meat sold, then next is pork with 20%, followed by beef, making up 18%; and finally come lamb, fish and other at 15%, 5% and 2% respectively.

纵向比较

1. Experience/witness/see/enjoy+修饰词(最高级)+增加/减少/震荡

Experience/enjoy + a significant/the most dramatic + decrease/increase

增加: increase, growth, rise 减少: decrease, drop

快速: dramatic, drastic 缓慢: gradual, steady, slow

大幅: significant, substantial 小幅: moderate, slight

震荡: considerable/marked/sharp/minor fluctuation

2. The number of···was No1 in Yr and rose/reduced by % to No2

The number of miles that car traveled was 3199 in 1985 and rose by 50% to 4806 in the subsequent years.

增加/上升: increase, rise, grow 急促上升: jump, soar to, surge to

减少/下降: decrease, drop, decline 急促下降: plummet to, plunge to

3. 主语+上升/减少to···or 主语+上升/减少by

4. The percentage/proportion/number of is 修饰词larger/ smaller than tha t of

修饰词明显:substantially, obviously轻微: slightly, moderately

5. A 修饰词increase/decrease occurred

修饰词大幅: considerable, significant, substantial 小幅: moderate, slight

6. 表示不变的状态：主语remain constant/unchanged/stable/steady at

表示趋势的句型

1. there is a downward/ upward/ opposite/ general/ dominant trend

下降的/上升的/相反的/总体的/主要的趋势

2. ···tend to be more/less preferred 倾向越来越受(不)受欢迎

As can be seen from the table, walk and certain short-distance transportation, such as cycled and local bus tend to be less preferred.

3. There is a considerable increase/decrease in···

There is a considerable increase in total miles by all modes of transportation, comp ared with the data (4,740 miles) in 1985.

表示比较增长或减少趋势

B also rose/increased/grew during this period, but less sharply

decreased/declined/dropped

The sales of games software also rose during this period, but less sharply. Sa les increased from about 13 billion dollars in 2000 to just under 20 billion dollars th ree years later.

表示相同相似变化趋势的句式

A similar situation was seen in the···, where

A similar situation was seen in the wholesale and retail trade sector, whe re the number of women rose from about 550 000 in 1975 to almost 800 000 two decades later.

There are some similarities between A and B

Be similar to/ A has something in common with B

表示变化特征的词汇

表示超过的词语

Outnumber比···多，在数量上超过

In this profession, women outnumber men by two to one.

= there are twice as many women as men 在这个行业，女性人数是男性的两倍

The number of men outnumbered women by four to one. 我们的人数以4比1超过他们

Exceed超过···数量

The price will not exceed $100.

Overtake(在数量或重要性方面)大于，超过

Nuclear energy may overtake oil as the main fuel.

表示连续的时间段

1. over a span of ···years

= over the period from···to···

= in the years between···and···

2. during the same period

3. in the No. years spanning from 19xx through 19xx

= from···to···within the 5 years period

4. from then on

= from this time onwards

= in the subsequent years.

横向比较

1. ···程度副词doubled/trebled三倍/quadruple四倍/halve减半(NO. vs NO.), w hile···doubled/trebled/quadrupled/halved which were 数字(年份) and 数字(年份) respectively.

The figure by long distance bus more than doubled during the same period (54 mil es vs. 124 miles), while the miles by taxi trebled which were 13 miles and 42 mile s respectively.

2. 表示―A 占总体的多少‖或―A为B···倍‖或―A为B的···分之···"

3. ···数字(A+B), of which A were···and B were···

Italy received 20 million visitors, of which 1.2 million were from the UK and 1.8 mil lion were from the USA.

4. ···had a higher/lower total number of 名词than any of the other+名词France had a higher total number of visitors than any of the other countries on the list.

表示比较的句型

1. likewise, 句子. 同样地，···

Likewise, the use of other, unspecified, forms of transport also increased.

2. By contrast/In comparison, 句子. 相反地，···

By contrast, the long distance vehicle enjoyed a significant increase over the period, spanning from 1985 to 2000, although there exists some differences.

In comparison, student expenditure in country C was considerably lower, at only US $1500 per year

3. compared with the data (数字) in 年份, 句子. 与···相比较，···

Overall, there is a considerable increase in total miles by all modes of transportatio n, compared with the data (4,740 miles) in 1985.

4. ···had half/twice/triple·times as many 可数名词as···, but/yet the numbe r of···and ···was the same.

Australia had half as many visitors as Thailand (3 million vs 6 million), but the nu mber of visitors to those countries from the UK and the USA was the same, 0.3 mi llion.

5. 句子, while 句子.

12 million Americans visited Canada while5.5 million visited Mexico.

6. ···had a higher/lower total number of···than any of the other+名词复数

France had a higher total number of visitors than any of the other countries on the list.

表示―%‖的词语

百分比：percentage, proportion, share

高：High, large –highest, largest

低：low, small—lowest, smallest

表示―占%‖的词组

正向：A constitute/occupy/account for/compose/comprise B A占B的%

负向：% of B be composed of A (总体)有%的(某一元素)

% of 名词be composed of (总体)有%的(某一元素)

Around 15% of our diet is composed of protein. 我们的饮食中大约有15%的蛋白质

composes (某一元素)构成总体的%

Christians compose around 2.5% of the country’s population 基督教徒占这个国家人口的2.5%

Comprise 构成

Older people comprise a large proportion of those living in poverty.

Constitute 构成

Constitute around 60% of the total/a larger percentage (around 20%) of Constitute the majority of the labour force. 占劳动力的大多数

Occupy 占据

Dry lands occupy a third of the world’s surface. 陆地占了地球表面的三分之一Account for (数量上，比例上)占

The Japanese market accounts for 35% of the company’s revenue.日本市场占公司收入的35%.

要区分数据是data 还是percentage.这个决定了相对应的词汇

如果大家能够熟练地掌握我上述的总结和归纳的话，相对对于以上四种图表一定能够得心应手了

Part 2 地图题

地图是最近比较流行的题目，本人连续考的4次雅思写作里面，居然有两次都是地图题（1 2月11日和2月26日）。不过对于应付这种题型，大家不用害怕，其实没什么大不了的。慎小嶷最近的新书《十天突破写作完整真题库》里面的DAY 1O(page 297~318)，有详细的归纳。以下内容均为摘抄该书的章节。恳请大家尊重别人的知识产权，在没有得到原作者允许的情况下，请勿用于商业用途~~

表示―A位于‖

A is located/situated/lies···

A is just off the road to···A就在通向某地的路边上

A is right at the center of···A就在···的正中央

表示―A靠近或者紧挨着B‖:A is next to/near/close to

表示―A在距离B某一面···公里处‖

A is located/situated/lies···kilometers/miles to the east/west/north/south of B

表示―A位于B内的某个部分‖

A is located/ situated/ lies in the eastern/western/northern/southern part of B

表示―A在B的某个角上‖

A lies/is located/is situated on/at the east/west/north/south/corner of B

表示―剩下的‖部分：The rest of the···

表示―道路通向/河流流向某处‖: The road runs from···to···

The river runs/ flows from···to···

表示―沿着河流/道路‖: Along with river/road Alongside the river/road

表示―A在道路或者河流的某一侧‖

A is located/situated/lies on the north/south side of the river/ the road

e.g. situated on the south side of the River Thames, this hotel offers its guests an ideal location in central London

表示―A与B仅一河之隔/仅一路之隔‖: A is right across from B

表示―A在道路或河流的南北端‖

A is located/situated/lies on the north/south end of the river/the road

表示―A在B的对面‖: A is opposite B

表示―A在B某一侧的边界上‖

A is located/situated/lies on the eastern/western/northern/southern border of B

表示―A在B某侧的边缘上‖

A is located/situated/lies on the eastern/western/northern/southern edge of B

表示―A朝北/朝南/面朝公园等‖

A faces north/south

A faces towards the north/ the south

A faces a park

表示―斜向的方位‖:

东北north-east 东南south-east

西北north-west 西南south-west

表示建筑物的布局：Layout

指一个建筑物周边的环境：The surroundings of a building

表示―A占据了某个空间‖：A occupies

表示A由几个不同的部分组成：A consists of/ is composed of/ is made up of B, C an d D

表示A的长度是：The length of A is···=A is···in length

表示A的宽度是：The width of A is···=A is···in width

表示A的面积是：A is···in area

The farm is 50 kilometers in area

The building almost doubled in floor area.

表示大约：approximately, roughly, about, around

表示一块地：a patch of land/ a stretch of land

表示从A·延伸到·：A extended/ stretched from···to···

The park extended from Main Street to King George Street

This period stretched from the mid-eighteenth century to the late nineteenth centur y

表示比较，―与···所不同的是‖

Unlike A, B

Compared with A, B

A···while/ whereas B···

In comparison/ in contrast/ by contrast, B

表示可以―使用‖：available

表示可以―容纳‖：can accommodate

表示理论上讲：in theory, theoretically, hypothetically

表示但事实上：but in reality/ however, realistically/ yet in practice/ but in fact/

as a matter of fact, though

表示在某处建造了A：A was built in=was constructed in=was established in

表示在某处又增建了A：A was added to=an addition was made to···,which was A

表示改动原建筑或原场地：v. change/ modify/ remodel

n. change/modification/remodeling

表示A被改造成了B：A was turned into/ was transformed into/ was converted into B

表示A被搬走或拆掉：A was removed/ demolished/ taken down from···

表示A被B取代了：A was replaced by B/ A made way for B

表示A的面积缩小：the size of A was reduced to only half of/ one third of the origi nal size

表示A的面积扩大: A was expanded to twice its size=the size of A almost doubled 表示A向XX方向延伸：expand/extend northward/southward/eastward/westward

表示A经历了：A experienced/ witnessed/saw

起初：at first=initially=in the beginning=originally

接着：then=next=after that=in the following stage=in the next/subsequent period=af terward

在这个阶段：at this point=in this phase=in this stage

最终：finally=eventually=in the end

Part 3 流程图

对于流程图，本人从来没有准备过。我觉得没必要捡了芝麻丢了西瓜。毕竟它出现的频率很低，而且几乎很难准备。有见及此，对于那些在考试当中遇到流程图的烤鸭们，我只能说：―不要慌，不要怕，前面就是天堂，一路走好！！‖

TASK 2 大作文

Part 1. 考官是怎么改卷子的？

知己知彼，百战百胜，所以―考官是怎么改卷子的，他以什么为标准的评分‖的尤为重要。经过朋友的介绍，我认识了Steward，他是一位资深的写作老师和改卷老师，在悉尼大学语言中心工作(那些在悉尼的朋友，如果想找他的话，请给我留言，我有他的联系方式)。我上了他两小时的课，他帮我改了12篇大作文和2篇小作文。我觉得这短短的两小时，远远比上什么新东方新航道环球雅思什么保7班精品班重要得多得多。after all，很多中国雅思老师还是处于意淫阶段。

看着他改了12篇文章，发现他改作文的模式非常非常的mechanical，他说考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文（including task 1 and task2），那就是说平均5分钟改一篇。在这五分钟里，他就死死地盯着评分规则，从task response, coherence and cohesion, lexical resour ces, grammatical range and accuracy 这四个方面评分。而且让我无比深刻的是：雅思是一门语言能力考试，它侧重于测试学生的语言表达能力，而不是思维能力。记住：核心词是语言表达！！

Part 2. 雅思写作7分是什么样的概念

以下是雅思写作的7分标准

(a). task response:

?addresses all parts of the task

?presents a clear position throughout the reponse

?presents, extend and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.

用中文最简单的理解是：首尾都要回答问题，允许泛泛而谈。这就是说，我们没必要花太多的精力去考虑观点是否绝对严谨是否意义深刻，关键是要告诉考官你的思考逻辑。这就是

剑桥雅思的魅力，它要考你的不是你的思维能力，而是你的语言表达能力。哪怕在ridiculo us的观点，只要你能用最恰当的语言去表达，你也可以同样得7分（当然，如果你的目标是8分，你就当我痴人说话吧）。还有就是说，很多题目本身包含很广泛的概念，很多大学教授用十几万字都解释不清的关系，怎么就能让我们这些门外汉用三言两语就解释好呢。说了这么多，我想说的是，如果你从一开始就习惯背诵满分作文，习惯复制别人的观点，这样的复习方法会很吃力（我不敢说是错的，那是确实低效，甚至有赌博成分），事倍功半。毕竟我们都是正常人，我们都有自己的思考能力和理解能力，我们说的每一个观点都是ma ke sense，不make sense的是我们没把那个观点说清楚。

(b). coherence and cohesion

?logically organises information and ideas, there is clear progression throug hout

?lises a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be som

e under-or over use

?presents a clear topic within each paragragh

用中文最简单的意思是：分段分点，每点之前必须有连接词。这一点非常非常容易达到（我总结了大量这样的词汇，明天或者后天上传上来）。然后那个考官最为推介的范式（以arg umentation的题目为例，因为report类的文章更死板了）：开头段+主体段（让步一段，支持（反对）两段）+结尾段。其实说白了，就是我们最熟悉不过的模版。也就是说，模版是非常有用的，之所以变成没用（serve no helpful purpose）是因为用模范的那个人没有用（想起粤语里面的一句歇后语，叫―太监撒尿‖）。至于怎么用模版才能变得不落于俗套，下文回答问题7的时候会有详细分析。

(c). lexcial resource

?uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision ?uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and colloca

tion

?may produce occasional erros in word choice, spelling and/or word formati on

?用中文最简单的意思是：足够就好，不需要多；一两个大词就够，不需要滥。一说到单词，相信我们并不陌生，甚至认为学英语就是背单词，写作就是单词的选美与

堆砌。尽管我们都知道这是不对的，但是依旧默默地坚持着，比如说背诵一大堆同

义词代换，一大堆除了莎士比亚见过之外其他人都没见过的大词。这样的复习会很

累而且会逐渐把雅思写作从逻辑表述变成词汇大杂烩。至于何谓是足够的单词，何

谓是less common lexical items，这就是问题6的范畴了。经过我写了大概30篇

雅思作文，我觉得我们需要的词汇其实真的不多（我的词汇表一定会upload上来，估计在明天或者后天）。我想说的是，记单词最好的方法是，把单词放到句型或者例句上面来，然后句型或者例句一定要与雅思写作topic 相关。如果不相关，证明那个词就算记住了，也不会用。

(d). Grammatical range and accuracy

?uses a variety of complex structures

?produces frequent error-free sentences

?has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few mistak e

?用中文最简单的意思是：句子结构多样性和允许语法错误的存在。对于句子结构多样性，这一点，我觉得我们中国学生肯定没问题的，什么定语从句，什么名词性从句，什么状语从句，倒装句，虚拟语态，被动语态等，我们只会过犹不及。从我的个人经验来看，我有时候会把定语从句和同位语从句搞乱（并不是我们不知道有什么不同，而是一紧张就很容易忽视了）。说到语法错误，我可以说，我们中国学生最最最常犯的语法错误都是非常低级（请参考part.4内容）。

Part 3. 雅思写作7分所需要的词汇

(a). 雅思写作必备连词--只要掌握了这些连词，就能符合到coher ence and cohesion 7分以上的要求

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为了更好地分享我的经验，我将以下的词语划分成三组

?用下划线highlight的是适用那些总感觉雅思写作写不长、写不满250字、需要灌水的同学

?用粗体highlight的是适用于那些每次都写得太长、写爆格，务实的同学

?用斜体highlight的是适用于那些有强烈大词欲，渴望用大词整死考官的同学

To signal sequence or addition

Accordingly, actually, additionally, afterwards, again, also, and, another, as was previously stated, as well as, at the same time, besides this, consistent with this, correspondingly,equally important, finally, further, furthermore, in addition, in a like manner, in the first place, in the same way, including, initially, last, likewise, m ore importantly, moreover, next, originally, overall, primarily, similarly, to begin w ith, too, what is more.

?To signal time

After, afterward, as long as, at first, at last, at length, at the same time, before, concurrently, currently, during, finally, following, immediately, in the future, in the meantime, last but not least, later, meanwhile, next, once, presently, rarely, si multaneously, sometimes, subsequently, then, this time, until, until then, whenev er, while.

?To show results

Accordingly, as a result, consequently, for this reason, hence, in other words, in t hat case, it follows that, it is evident that, otherwise, owing to, resulting from this, so it can be seen that, that being the case, therefore this implies, this sugges ts that, thus, under these circumstances.

?To introduce evidence/support/reasons

Contradictory to this, contrarily, in support of this, it follows, this is clear becaus e, the evidence for···is, the reasons for···are, this is supported by, to affirm this, to attest to this, to corroborate, to explain, to further confirm, to further verify, t o list, to substantiate this, in substantiation.

?To signal repetition, summary, or conclusion

Accordingly, all in all, all together, as a final point, as a result, as I have noted, as indicated earlier, as mentioned, as previously stated, as we have seen, briefly, b y and large, consequently, finally, given these facts, hence, in brief, in conclusi on, in other words, in short, in summary, to sum up, in summation, on the whole, overall, since, so, summing up, then, therefore, thus, thus we can see that, to co nclude, to recapitulate, to repeat, to review.

?To introduce causes or effects

Accordingly, as a result, because, consequently, due to, for as much as, for th at reason, hence, in as much as, in that, in view of, on account of, owing, sinc e, then, therefore, thus, to narrow the focus, after all, from this perspective, from t his point of view, given this context, in fact, in order to, in other words, in particul ar, in this case, in this context, indeed, particularly, put another way, specifically, th at is, this is particularly true when, under certain, circumstances, up to a point, wit h this in mind.

?To contrast,

After all, although, alternately, and yet, at the same time, be that as it may, bu, contrastingly, conversely, despite, dissimilarly, even though, for all that, however, in contrast, in contrast to this, in opposition to this, in reality, in spite of this, inco nsistent with this is that, instead, meanwhile, nevertheless, nonetheless, notwiths

tanding,on the contrary, on the one hand, on the other hand, otherwise, paradoxic ally, rather than, regardless of,still, though, whereas, when in fact, yet.

?To compare

Also, analogous to, another similar issue is, at the same time, by the same token, equally, in comparison, in like manner, in similar fashion, in the same way, likewis e, similarly.

?To clarify

In other words, that is, that is to say, this means that, to clarify, to elaborate, to explain, to paraphrase, to put it another way.

?To show purpose

In order to, in the hope that, for the purpose, with this end, to the end that, wit h this objective

?To dismiss

All the same, at any rate, either way, in any event, in either case, whatever happ ens.

?To signal concession

Admittedly, albeit, although it is true that certainly, even so, granted, it may ap pear that, knowing this, naturally, of course, this is only the case when, while this i s true, while it may seem that.

?To signify a condition

Granting that, in the event of, on the condition that, providing that, so long as ?To prove examples

As an illustration, by way of example, for example, for instance, in particular, in s upport of this, notably, to demonstrate, to elaborate, to exemplify, to highlight, to il lustrate, specifically, that is.

?To reference

Concerning this, considering this, with respect to, with regards to ?To emphasise

Above all, as a matter of fact, certainly, chiefly, especially, importantly, in any cas e, in particular, indeed, it must be emphasised, that, mainly, mostly, notably, obv iously, of course, particularly, primarily, specifically, truly, undoubtedly.

(b). 雅思写作必备同义词代换--只要掌握了这些连词，就能游刃有

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中性动词

1. 导致：v. cause, bring about, give rise to, lead to, generate, create, Be a contributing factor to

2. 认为：v. point out, argue, claim, assert, think, consider

3. 强调：v. emphasize, bring/call attention to, accentuate, heighten, strengt hen

4. 集中：v. focus on, concentrate on

5. 解决：v. combat, address, tackle, resolve, solve

6. 从事：v. carry out, conduct, perform

7. 承认：v. concede, admit, acknowledge, accept, allow, grant

正向动词

1. 支持：v. support, advocate, agree with

2. 增加：v. increase, grow, rise, enlarge

n. increase, growth, rise, enlargement

3. 改善：v. improve, enhance, upgrade, boost

n. improvement, enhancement, boom

4. 扩张：v. expand, enlarge, extend, widen, broaden

n. expansion, enlargement, extension

5. 提高：v. augment, increase, develop, intensify

n. augment, increase, development

6. 发展：v. develop, advance, grow, evolve, flourish

n. development, advancement, growth, flourishing

7. 产生：v. develop, come into being/existence, come about

8. 获得：v. acquire, gain, get, obtain, attain

9. 执行：v. implement, execute, put into effect, perform

n. implementation, performance

10. 实现：v. achieve, fulfill, gain, accomplish, attain

n. achievement, accomplishment, attainment

11. 开始：v. commence, begin, start

n. commencement, beginning, start

12. 促进：v. promote, further, advance, encourage, stimulate, foster

n. promotion, advancement

13. 鼓励：v. stimulate, encourage, act as stimulus, motivate

n. encouragement, incentive, motivation

14. 唤起：v. arouse, cause, induce, prompt, trigger, spark off

15. 需要：v. call for, demand, require

16. 取代：v. replace, take the place of, substitute for

n. replacement, substitution for, in place of

17. 加快：v. accelerate, speed up, quicken

n. Acceleration, speeding up

18. 减轻：v. abate, lessen, reduce, alleviate, mitigate

n. abatement, lessening, alleviation, mitigation

19. 保护：v. protect, preserve, conserve

n. protection, preservation, conservation

20. 保卫：v. safeguard, defend, shield

n. safeguard, defence, shelter

21. 建立：v. establish, set up, found, construct

n. establishment, foundation, construction

22. 遵守(规则，法律)：abide by, comply with, follow, respect, act in accordan ce with

23. 允许：v. allow, permit, give the means to, facilitate

负向动词

1. 反对：v. object, raise objections, oppose

2. 减少：v. decrease, lower, reduce, cut down

n. decrease, reduction, drop, decline

3. 耗尽：v. deplete, exhaust, use up

n. depletion, exhaustion, using up,

4. 阻碍：v. hamper, hinder, obstruct, impede, inhibit

n. hindrance, obstruction, obstacle, impediment

5. 限制：v. limit, curb, restrict, place a limit on

n. limit, restriction

6. 危及：v. endanger, imperil, jeopardize, put at risk

7. 衰败：v. deteriorate, degrade, degenerate, rot

n. deterioration, degeneration

8. 恶化：v. exacerbate, aggravate, worsen, inflame

n. exacerbation, aggravation, worsening

9. 加剧：v. intensify, escalate, sharpen, aggravate

n. escalation, intensification, aggravation

10. 破坏：v. damage, destroy, ruin, devastate

n. damage, destruction, ruin, devastation

adj. devastating, destructive

11. 污染：v. pollute, contaminate

n. pollution, contamination

12. 败坏：v. pervert, corrupt, deprave, lead astray, debase

13. 扭曲：v. distort, pervert, misrepresent, falsify, misstate, misreport

14. 削弱：v. weaken, undermine, impair, invalidate

15. 干涉：v. interfere in/with, intervene in, impinge on/upon(侵犯)

n. interference/intervention/involvement in/with

16. 侵犯：v. encroach on/upon (time/rights/personal life)

n. encroachment on/upon = impinging on/upon

17. 与···相违背/相矛盾：run counter to = run contrary to

Contradict (each other)= conflict with = be at odds with sth 18. 误解：v. misunderstand, misapprehend, misinterpret

n. misunderstanding, misapprehension, misinterpretation

19. 逃避：v. escape, break out, evade, elude

20. 遭受：v. suffer from, be stricken with, be afflicted with

21. 违反：v. violate, disobey, transgress, infringe

n. violation, infringement, contravention, breach

22. 忽视：v. lose sight of, ignore, neglect

23. 疏远：v. alienate, isolate, become/get estranged from

n. alienation, isolation, estrangement

其他重要的同义词代换

1. 大量的：enormous, massive, tremendous, considerable

2. 重要的：significant, substantial, crucial, important

3. 严重的：adj. severe, serious, acute, drastic

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