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篇一:只有惜缘才能续缘

只有惜缘才能续缘

在人生的路上我们会遇到很多人,看似平淡的相遇,其实有缘才会相聚。亲人多半是我们前世的好友,好友多半是我们前世的亲人。给我们带来烦恼的多半是我们前世伤害过的。所以,一定要善待身边的朋友,宽恕那些伤害过我们的人。这就是因果······

篇二:我与大嫂再续缘

我与大嫂再续缘作者:留雪欲滴[我的文集] [QQ空间]在会员中心“详细资料”填写QQ即显空间链接

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十年的想念终于相见——

大嫂回来了!还带回了堂大哥唯一的“根儿”——他唯一的亲生女儿。

再一次见到大嫂,是在堂叔的丧葬礼会上,这是我做梦也没想到的事。

本以为,这辈子再没有和大嫂见面的机会,没成想,堂叔的死,居然天注定般地牵起了大嫂和我们这一家渺茫的缘分。

虽然,我明明清楚的知道,再次与大嫂见面的缘分根本维持不了几天,因为大嫂终究还会回她的家乡,更因为她早就和这家人没了任何关系——堂大哥有了现在的女人,但这并不能掩饰得住我发自内心的激动和喜悦的心情。唯独觉得欠妥的是,这样的心情不该出现在堂叔尸骨未寒的当下。不过,我相信,堂叔泉下有知一定不会怪罪的,因为他也希望他离去十几年的儿媳有朝一日能带着他日思夜想的孙女,重返家园的一天!

大嫂能回来,是这个家里所有人都觉得不可能的事,因为先前堂婶再三苦口相劝过,即便堂弟(堂大哥的四弟)一再强调这家人只是想念大嫂和孩子,也只是单纯地想见见大嫂和孩子。然而依然没能争取到大嫂家人的同意让她娘俩回来探望一下(大嫂的亲哥怕大嫂回来后再受委屈,又怕这家人把大嫂一人辛辛苦苦带大的女儿扣下不让回去)。再说大嫂本身也不愿回来,不是她对着家里的人没有感情(除堂大哥之外),她说过她也十分想念这家子人。只是怕回来后与堂大哥现在的女人碰面尴尬,更没法面对曾经给她太多伤痕的堂大哥。还有就是觉得,自己回来算那个角色呢?这是大嫂和我通电话的时候说的。我实在也是十分希望大嫂能回来与她见上一面,即便理解她的苦衷,还是偏袒这家人的心愿并诚心地劝说她。皇天不负有心人,大嫂终于还是回来了,她说,她实在也抵制不住想念这家对她好的人,下定决心回来了!

永远也忘不掉大嫂回来的场面,这个围着大嫂大嫂的叫,那的也围着大嫂大嫂的喊着,就连村里看热闹的都跟着感慨。我的心情更是难以言喻。

滑稽的是现在的堂大哥的媳妇好像她才是多余,被晒在一边没人理,“孤零零的”有点可怜!堂嫂大方的言谈举止得到了村里人的赞同,都上赶着和大嫂打招呼,相信这是堂大哥现在的女人从未享受过的待遇。

大嫂在家里住了十来天,同她相处,发现大嫂比以前在的时候开朗了许多,她说她什么都不在乎了,只希望平平静静把女儿养大。见大嫂如此的心胸,我真的为大嫂高兴,只是由于时间有限我没能把大嫂陪到尽兴。

大嫂还没离开,我就盼着下次,她啥时候再回来?

大嫂还是走了,有些遗憾!不过还好,这次大嫂的离开,是带着舍不得的心态离开的。

篇三:无恋,过一种平衡的生活(2013年高考语文零分作文)

无恋,过一种平衡的生活

四川考生婆城怪

苦读寒窗十二年,今日始坐此桌前。一看作文题目够犯贱,《过一种平衡的生活》?我一路千辛万苦走过来你叫我回到原点?你以为我是屈原?高考作文不让写诗歌就潜水两千多年?真的回去你保我本科线?真的回去你保我重点?真的能过一种平衡的生活?教育不公平,考试不公平,生活咋平衡?

废话不连篇,试卷见真言。出题专家大过天,我一届考生安敢妄断言?欲书真情一片片,无奈真情不值钱。惊闻军部要人发言钓鱼岛搁置争议暂不管,回到原点谁不叹?可叹那主权渐行渐远,可叹那美帝和小鬼子密谋肏天!要是那么轻易能回到从前,六天前我还想小过个童年。既然想拿分又不能以真情赚阅卷老师个涕泪涟涟,那么就只能随随便便写写感言,拼个八百字来凑一篇。

如果可以回到原点,中国的教育制度会不会还这么贱?大热天的整一帮人呆在考场上玩试卷。今年六月变了天,酷热天气不一般。如果可以回到原点,中国的监考老师会不会还这么闲?大热天的盯着一帮人在考场上怎么玩试卷?还间间考试标准化,摄像头前吾等孺子吓破胆!如果可以回到原点,中国的高考考生会不会还这么癫?大热天的被三只狗(据说一只狗名字时髦叫“电子狗”)盯着继续玩试卷。

不管回不回得到原点,悲剧地是我已坐在这个地点,望穿试卷数着钟点,饱含深情地书写着零星点点,期待着高考后新的人生起点。假如真的可以过一种平衡的生活,请给我一根可随意变化如如意金箍棒的杠杆,随便也请给我一个支点,我一定能挑起这无恋的生活,让它平衡两边!

忆往昔峥嵘岁月无限,伤今朝似水年华缺钱。回到原点,青春又该如何演变?

心理刚找到一丝平衡的感觉,不觉摇头晃脑意蹁跹。忽觉两道猥琐目光闪过视线,转回眼前,两狗盯着我嘴角偏,意必奸。你妹的老子正郁闷间,要不是在考试你俩绝对遭扁。考场碎碎念,太上老君灵感速速现。助我才华横溢迈步跨天堑,文思敏捷昂首过深渊。回到思绪原点,继续文章铺垫,落笔生花花惊艳,笔走龙蛇蛇蜿蜒。震撼乾坤磨灭英雄剑,睥睨天下凋落玉人颜。

回到原点,平衡心态,我用一颗倔强的心重新载入盖世神篇??

回到原点,平衡心态,又是一个艳阳天。风轻拂过你发边,缠绵于我指尖。我抬起你下巴末端,绽放一段惊世情缘。不要说我太过善变,我只是想体验一下断背之恋,这也是一种平衡的生活,也许过于惊艳!

回到原点,平衡心态,又是一个艳阳天。我嘴里叼着半根烟,徐徐喷吐缭绕于你面前。我以我万世泣鬼英姿赌你千秋骄人容颜,惊起赌坛腥风血雨连连。不要说我太过疯癫,我只是想了却一桩豪赌之愿。可梦想断于富二代、官二代!

回到原点,平衡心态,又是一个艳阳天。我鼻孔还有些许粉末流连,眼眸在你的抚摸下越发憔悴内敛。我很享受地汲取着最后一滴灵魂甘泉,世界兴奋得和着悦耳的音弦。不要说我太过沦陷,我只是想感受一次神仙之玄。

回到原点,平衡心态,又是一个艳阳天。你将中国梦要义铭记在心间,我在你身后为我们布置完美升天。你我功德圆满模糊了生死的界限,风吹过卷起熊熊火焰。不要说我太过短线,我只是想领悟一些众生之源。

回到原点,再续缘??平衡的生活也许就在眼前!

终于写到作文终点,抬头依旧碰到两双狗眼,俯身看表时间还剩一点点,于是风声席卷,讲台那头突兀泛起一波潋滟:

“终于无恋,过一种平衡的生活!老师交卷——”

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