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大连朗阁雅思培训—雅思作文上不了6分,原来都是因为这个错误

大连朗阁雅思培训—雅思作文上不了6分,原来都是因为这个错误

大连朗阁雅思培训—雅思作文上不了6分,原来都是因为这个错误

今天主要从语法中最为基本的主谓角度,剖析下怎么先把基本的句子写对,再去构建长句。请各位谨记,写作的首要原则是,先做到精准再做到精彩,如果简单句都错误百出,那再多的所谓“长句难句”也没有用。

相信很多考生都有同样的感受,花了几年甚至十几年的时间学习英语(精品课),其中语法这部分学明白的没有几个。不过当我问到学生,语法过多的细节概念我们先不追究,就说主谓关系这,能分清楚不?基本所有学生都会自信的说,主谓这个语法点,我还是没有问题的。但就是主谓这里,让很多学生都翻了船。

先来看下,从我学生材料中挑选的这几个句子:

1.There are many people think that parents play an important role in children’s education.

2.In terms of the consumption of beef saw a dramatic increase.

3.If sufficient underground train systems are built.

仔细观察,不知大家是否发现了这几个句子中的语法问题呢?我们首先要承认,这三个句子用词都还不错,但都在语法这出了问题。首先看句1,如果大家对主谓要求有所了解的话,就应该知道一个句子中只能包含一个谓语。但这个句子出现了两个谓语are 及 think 。正确改法,把think变为非谓语动词的形式, thinking。

句2,句子中缺少主语,很多人会把in terms of the consumption of chicken 当做主语,但他实际只是

状语,正确改法, In terms of the consumption of chicken, it saw a dramatic rise. 加上it做句子的主语。

最后一个,句3,确实有主谓,但句意不完整,如果建立了充分的地铁系统,之后会怎么样呢?缓解交通阻塞还是会消耗政府大量资金?不仅从语义角度来讲,这个句子是不完整的,从语法角度来说也是有残缺的。 If 用来引导从句,要附属于主句而存在,那这里我们只见从句,不见主句。所以,还是一个错误的句子。正确改法, If sufficient underground train systems are built, then the traffic congestion will be eased.

在考官的五分评分标准中明确的指出,五分的作文语法上会: may make frequent grammatical errors and punctuation may be faulty; errors can cause some difficulty for the reader. 言外之意,造成读者理

解困难的文章,语法上只能达到5分。那这里我们所说的句1出现的谓语问题,句2出现的主语问题以及句3的句义不完整,就是会导致读者理解上出现困难的语法问题。如果评分标准中语法这项仅仅是5

分的话,全文的分数一般也就不过5.5了。

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there is clear progression throughout ?uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use ?presents a clear central topic within each paragraph ?uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision ?uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation ?may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation ?uses a variety of complex structures ?produces frequent error-free sentences ?has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors 6 ?addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others ?presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive ?presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear ?arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression ?uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical ?may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately ?uses paragraphing, but not always logically ?uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task ?attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy ?makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication ?uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms ?makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication 5 ?addresses the task only partially; 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