2016届高考英语短文改错集训(9)及答案解析

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Passage 1

Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.

Passage 2

Television plays important part in our life. It shows us information program, like the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment.

A television set can be used for another things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our influencing lives ever since.

Passage 3

Before I left my hometown to come to study in England,1 was partly terrified, and mostly I was excited. I was travelling all on my own to a place that I don't know any person at all. I couldn't even say the language well, but l wasn't going to let that stop me. Within a few month. after arriving in London, I fall in love with the city .I met some of the most amazing people from all over the world.1 wasn't quite preparing for the culture shock of a different place at the

beginning of. But after one and half years ,I am accustomed to living there .I have realized our views and ideas have changed completely in this country.

Passage 4

Cheetahs(猎豹) are the fast land creatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly? The only animal that comes close to the cheetah’s amazed speed is its best favorite food, the gazelle(瞪羚). In order to catch up a meal that’s as swift a s the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none of them can match the speed of the cheetah.

Passage 5

Dear Andy,

I’m glad to hear from you. You ask about my health in your last email. So I’m going to tell you about diet. I’m a very health person. That’s why we live near the sea an d we often have fish. I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables. And of course there will also be some rices. If you come to visit me in China on one day, you won’t eat many sweets. So I hope you don’t have sweet tooth.

I’m going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them to you. I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.

Passage 6

I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years before. It was really huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eye. Later on, unlike other girls, I was volunteered to go waterskiing alone. I took on the life jacket, got off the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possibly.

The lake seemed broad and endless. I was so exciting to appreciate the beauty of the mountains and waters that I speed my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found me in the middle of the endless lake. I really enjoyed the unforgettable experience!

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（九）答案

Passage 1

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Passage 2

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Passage 3

1.and改为but

2.that改为where

3.say改为speak

4.month改为months

5.fall改为fell

6.preparing改为prepared

7.去掉beginning 后of

8.half前加a

9.there改为here 10.our改为my

Passage 4

1. fast——fastest in the world提示我们要用最高级。

2.running——run be able to 后用动词原形

3.fastly——fast fast 既可以做形容词，也可以做副词，英语中无fastly。

4.amazed——amazing –ed 修饰人，-ing修饰物

5.去掉best favorite=like…best，这里重复，去掉best。

6. catch up后加上with catch up with 追上；赶上

7.had ——has 短文整体时态用一般现在时。

8. as——than 句中出现faster比较级，故用than。

9. a——an excellent example元音发音前用an。10. is——are several species是复数，故用there are。

Passage 5

1.ask改成asked

2.diet前加my

3.health 改为healthy

4.why 改为because

5.and 改为but

6.probable改为probably

7.rices 改为rice

8.去掉on

9.have 后加a 10.for 改为of

Passage 6

1. before→ago

2.really ∧a huge lake

3.eye→eyes

4.was volunteered 删掉 was

5.took →put

6.off→ on

7.possibly→possible

8.exciting→excited

9.speed→sped

10.me→myself

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2020年高考英语专题十一短文改错说明类专练含

专题十一短文改错说明类专练 （90分钟 100分） 考点01：冠词 3颗星 考点02：代词 3颗星 考点03：介词和介词短语 2颗星 考点04: 名词 3颗星 考点05：主谓一致 5颗星 考点06：形容词和副词 5颗星 考点08：非谓语动词 5颗星 考点09：动词的时态和语态 5颗星 考点10：定语从句 3颗星 考点11 名词性从句 3颗星 考点12 并列连词 4颗星 考点13 状语从句 3颗星 考点28：短文改错说明文专练 5颗星 短文改错（每题1分，共40分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 A Chinese Dream is made up of ordinary people dreams. If someone asks me how 考点11 my Chinese dream is, and 考点12 I will answer it without hesitation：to be a good doctor. The reason when 考点10 I want to be a doctor

is because考点11 I want to save as many lives that 考点13 I can. If 考点13 I was young, I got seriously injured in a terrible accident. Thanks to the doctors’ efforts, so I was brought back to life. Since then, which考点11 has always encouraged me is to be a good doctor. To make sure of 考点11 my dream can be realized, I have been studying hard so as考点13 I can be admitted into a good medical college. Only in this way can I achieve my goal. B As we all know, to change the entire world is absolute考点06 impossible. But a number of small change考点04 can make a big difference. Every one has tasks that they fear to doing考点08. Think of a task that your dear one hated 考点09, and do it for him or her! You can imagine the pleasure where 考点13 you see your bathroom unexpectedly cleaned. Next, whether your talent is singing, cooking and考点12 giving good advice, share it. You may not think your talent is interesting, but they 考点02 can make the world a better place. Start 考点01 conversation with someone. It feels great to have a good conversation that connects you with someone. Whoever you choose from考点03, making a meaningful conversation can make newer 考点06 connections or strengthen old ones. C As is well know考点08, books teach us to learn life, truth, science and many other useful things. They increased考点09 our knowledge, broaden our minds and strengthen our character. In the other words, they are our good teachers and wise friend考点04. This is the reason that考点10 our parents always encourage us to read more books. Read考点08 is a good thing, but we must pay greatly考点06 attention to the choice of books. It is true that we can get benefits 考点03good books. Otherwise考点06, bad books will do us much 考点06 harm than good. D

高考英语短文改错(含答案)

1、【题文】 Last night my wife and I had dinner at a restaurant not far from our home. We like this place very much, but we have eaten there many times. Last night, otherwise, the service was not very good. We had to wait a long time after a waiter came to our table. He was very nice, but he didn't do the very good job. I ordered chicken with mushroom, but he bring me chicken with cream sauce. My wife got her main course OK, but she put the wrong kind of salad dressing on her salad. We didn't say something to the waiter. We just ate what he brought us. I know that 15% is the unusual amount for a tip. I wanted to leave 10% show that we were not happy. Did I do the right thing? 2、【题文】 It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with.It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone abroad for further studies, but they calls back or sent greeting card from different places. 3、【题文】 I was walking home from school while suddenly it rained heavy. What should I do? I didn’t have an umbrella and a raincoat with me. I looked around and see some students walking happily under their umbrellas. They must listened to the weather forecast. I began to run and caught in the rain. I kept running until I got to a bookstore which I could wait until the rain stopped and in the same time I could read my favorite books. After about half a hour, the rain stopped and I go home. 4、【题文】 My family was very poor when I was child. My parents were workers but couldn’t afford to buy toys from me. As a result, my dolls looked a lot differently from those bought from toy stores. My dolls were home-made. The first doll I owned it was made of a glass Coca-Cola bottle. I was such excited to make a doll by itself. Soon I became a collector of empty Coca-Cola bottles because I see each bottle as a possible baby doll at